马上比赛就开始了,但还是想请英语好的帮忙

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国妓米兰

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发表于 2009-1-2 16:31 |只看该作者

applying改成applied
in a few days, in删掉
send 改成sent
plus改成add
in it改成on it
as that？貌似美这种表达，改成so that
the goods can't be lost改成won't

哥正好没事顺手一改……
FacelessMan 发表于 2009-1-2 14:07

呃呃呃，这个sent我确实看错了

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I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front only the essential facts of life, and see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I had not lived.

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